I agree at where the text is placed, really goes in with the theme, looks like the top part of the sun?
Maybe you can change the angle of the texts slightly or make it bigger, as you have to look closely to read it? I'm not sure if that would ruin the effect but probably worth a try? I'm a photo editing noob myself. The photo editing software I use is Macromedia Fireworks MX 2004. lol
Its ok for basic editing fun. I lack creativity too, when it comes to photo editing I will probably have one idea in mind and then apply it to every single photo I edit. Something like:
Take the person or figure out, stick a background behind it, blend the person or figure into the background, blur the edges of the figure or person so it doesn't look like I've done it in a couple of seconds. lol
A nice attempt, the photo definitely caught my eye when I opened the thread.👍